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From: JmCQE8eT4woN
Date: 03 Oct 2015
Time: 05:33:19
Remote Name: 188.143.234.155
Paul:As a former English intcrutsor at a university, I shall correct you from time to time, which probably drives you crazy! I mean well, and I hope you'll take my criticism in hand, as it's mean to be constructive.As your self-appointed mentor, I can tell that you wrote this piece quickly. I know because I also know that you write very well when not hurried (or excited?).You wrote I’m not sure if this is obvious, and I’m certainly not sure how either people do it, but when confronted with a long writing project The sentence is a little confusing with your placement of either. I'd simply remove it or replace it with other.